Great adventure with good hand-outs!
My two concerns, that barr the 5:th star rating, is (SPOILER!) 1) why there was a need to find a glass dagger, and 2) what really happened to the comedian who turned himself in only to vanish. After all, the retired detective ran over one Laughter-spreading comedian with his car, so that seemed to do the trick, so why go about a silly ritualistic dagger made of glass..? And as for the old comedian; what happens to Rafe when his protegés don't follow through... will they start to age, or what? Continuing to be a drain on his magic points, or something, because otherwise there's really nothing restricting him to turn everyone in LA into a comedian..?
[4 of 5 Stars!]