This pdf is 13 pages long, 1 page front cover, 1 page editorial, 2 pages SRD and 1 page back cover, leaving 8 pages for Cytheria, the first commercial release of TPK games. Does she hold up to her name?
Well, before getting to the mechanics, you should know that she gets a cool 1-page hand-drawn artwork by Michael Fall that shows her true depravity in the mirror while presenting her angelic, innocent exterior. Nice!
So, who is Cytheria? Mechanics-wise, she is a level 9 Antipaladin 9/Holy Vindicator 1, which, from a crunch point of view, didn't impress me at all - with Faces of the tarnished Souk's extremely complex multi-templated statblocks, one PrC is not too exciting. Good fluff, though, can save a lot, a does presentation, so how does she fare in these regards?
Cytheria was bought and indoctrinated into an order devoted to spreading pain at a young age and the Zon-Kuthonesque clergy purged any vestige of goodness from her she might have had. In order to soothe her damaged soul and to pay homage to her order's master, she now repeats this vicious cycle, manipulating peasants and buying their children for a supposedly better life, only to subject them to the same depravities that broke her. I hate to say it, but story-wise, that's not interesting or imaginative - in fact, I've seen this background-story executed x times.
What is interesting, though, is the duality of her being - her adaption of good cleric roles to fulfill her vile goals and her contrasting true appearance hint at some kind of deep-seated psychological issue and could have easily been expanded into a full-blown MPD, which would have not only added a dimension to the character, but also would have made for a good basic for some unique rules, but oh well. Morale, Network and resources as points to consider have also been addressed, which I consider a definite plus. Even better, her tactics (involving kidnapping and taking hostages) make for cool Mexican stand-off-like situations and might well offer an aspiring DM easy ways to let her get away from the PCs. She also comes, with a quote, a babau servant and plot hooks.
Presentation-wise, the pdf gets some things right and some things wrong - almost all of her items, traits, feats and special qualities come with hyperlinks to d20pfsrd, which is a boon for any GM running her from a laptop or wanting to check out some rules details. Her babau servant does get some of his abilities hyperlinked as well, but e.g. not all feats, which is a pity. The layout itself is printer-friendly, clear and concise, however: I don't get why the statblocks have a grey background. That is just an unnecessary drain on the printer.
Conclusion:
Editing and formatting are top-notch, I didn't notice any mistakes. Layout adheres to the two-column standard and the one piece of artwork rocks. The pdf has two bookmarks - more would have been nice. I'm a bit torn on this one - this pdf feels like it didn't realize its own potential, either with regards to her mental state or its d20pfsrd-implementation. While Cytheria is a nice adversary, she unfortunately is also one I could improvise on the spot. Having all her gear ready to go is neat, yeah, and if there were no other 3pps out there, I'd rate this higher. However: Rite Publishing's FAces of the Tarnished Souk offers 3 statblocks of one character per installment, each being more complex than Cytheria. NeoExodus' Widowmakes Scarlet is also 3 creatures in one and has the superior artwork. And then there are Raging Swan Press' excellent Antipaladins and Villains I + II books.
Unfortunately, all of the blow Cytheria out of the water in at least some regard. The d20pfsrd-innovation, her central advantage over the other pdfs, has unfortunately not been implemented to its logical conclusion. Don't get me wrong. This is a good file. It does nothing truly wrong. However, it has to be judged among peers that can be considered excellent and thus trump her. Cytheria is a step into the right direction from Slogar, but can't yet play on a level field with her contemporaries, who offer universally more content and/or content you couldn't easily put together yourself. Unfortunately barring any striking argument why you should/must buy Cytheria, my final verdict will be 3 stars. I definitely hope the guys and gals from TPK-games continue their endeavors to create more villains and expand upon their significant potential.
Endzeitgeist out.
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