The concept is great and the material that's there is ripe for usage. But I just can't recommend this until the pdf is FINISHED. As it stands while I'm writing this, the author left multiple areas where the Garage template leaves prompts to use/fill out. Such as the opening paragraph for Places of Interest, the third place of which not even having its name typed, multiple soft moves for the David Scott Danger profile. Adding to the unfinished pile is the fact that the entire Destiny theme for BLESSING VENI VIDI VICI isn't even halfway written. There aren't even "substitute tags" for tags B-J, or the weakness tags. And the title + mystery still have the brackets on either end, despite the author not doing so for any other theme included. This would be a great district for MCs to grab and use for their cities. If only the author actually finished and proof-read it before publishing.
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