Some of these Lux Adversaria books are excellent. Unfortunately, this isn't one of them. It looks like it was made up of many articles.
Ordinarily, that would be fine. But in this case, it desperately needed editing. We get the same topics listed over and over with very little variation... or information. This could have been edited down to about five pages.
i think this is a weakness with the "Understanding XXX Roleplaying" volumes. The "Adventures" and "Characters" volumes are much more helpful.
To improve the volume, I'd suggest editing to remove redundancies, and giving more examples for the topics.
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