Though this product has a lot of potential, it also has a lot of flaws, and with the rather steep price of $5 for 12 pages, I can't recommend it. The four characters contained aren't terrible, though they're fairly one-note. The K'llashaa is probably the most interesting of the four, but even she is fairly shallow for an RMC. Moreover, there's numerous typos and spelling errors, though I get the impression that English isn't the writer's native language (by things like "quantum physician" instead of "quantum physicist"). The mechanics, specifically the stat blocks, suggest that the writer is not fully familiar with the rules of Mage: the Ascension. Two of the characters have Spheres at 5 with Arete of 4, and one has the sphere of "Space." If it were priced lower, I'd be able to recommend it, but at the least it requires some editing.
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