Some cool art and interesting ideas on how to structure a WWN adventure with a few unique mechanics, but overall I felt underwhelmed, especially at this price point.
I think if the scene recaps were cut (a one page summary for each one page entry is not needed), the typos on alomst every page cleaned up, and the price reduced to around $3, you'd have yourself a pretty solid product.
Oh, and starting off the adventure with a unavoidable trap that EVERYONE has to roll a save or take 1d6 damage is a terrible idea!
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