the only thing I would change is adding rules for lactose intolerance and Cow's Milk Allergy (and yes, there is a difference). It's so close to 10 out of 10 for me, though, that I am rating it as such. Also, side note to people planning on running this: Ask your players if they have any phobias before you decide attractions or even decide to run this. I was going to include the Snake charmer attraction, but realized that 2 of my players had Ophidophobia, the fear of snakes. If I had had players who had severe coulrophobia (fear of clowns) or, heaven forbid, galaphobia/lactophobia/lactaphobia (fear of milk), the adventure would probably be right out. However, if you have the right group of PCs with the right attractions, this looks like it will be a blast to run, maybe even more than once. This is an edit, because the other concern I had about the adventure was addressed by the author: adding the files for the maps for easy printing. edit 2: On going to print off maps, I noticed there's no map for pavilion of fun, but that should be simple enough to draw up, I think. edit 3: On our second playthrough of this adventure they ran into a milk mime. I discovered that I couldn't do what the milk mime was intended to do, which was cast cloud of daggers and wall of force simultaneously, as they were both concentration spells. I had to fudge it a little to work, especially when the party's first response to being put in a wall of force was to try and disrupt concentration of the spellcaster. This was likely a small oversight on the part of Justice Arman, but I am still rating it 5 stars.
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