The plot is nice. The rest could use some more polishing.
I think that "Dead End" is the best Fading Suns shard so far. The plot is very interesting and can serve as a very good introduction to the FS universe. It can also server as a great campaign starting point as it leads to a variety of situations PCs will find themselves at the end of the adventure.
However, "Dead End" would make a very nice full-size adventure. The writing is fine but it's a shame that such a plot was put into such a confined space. Some more details, side-plots and details would really come useful and the GMs will have to change and develop the content by themselves, especially those scraps of ready-made dialogues.
Nonetheless, two thumbs up!
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