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What is there not to love about this set of tiles ... nothing.
Worth well more than PWYW, with the suggested price close to or spot on the mark.
Any DM, with a little time and patience could use what's present to create just about anything they want to a high degree of presentation.
My only 'want' from this package would have been a small sample dungeon that used the tiles present to give new VTT DM's an idea of what to look at. This omission didn't detract from my rating ... just something of a personal nature for newer DM's to see.
Overall ... EXCELLENT submission and well worth the dropping the author a few to the suggested gold coins to encourage future submissions hitting the guild!
Well Done Indeed (2 thumbs up)
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Not and bad effort and a pleasure to read.
- 2nd set of eyes for editing (spelling, grammer and punctuation ... one example: Pellor should have been Pelor) ... here's your -1 star ...
- Suggested price is slightly over priced for what it is by comparison to other submissions on the guild. Look aat other submissions and adjust to suit.
- Lack of referencing throughout but creative use of creature stat blocks helps make up for the more original creatures and items presented.
- Creative use of stock art and love the fact the author presented a map for the appropriate section of the text.
Overall ... well worth a look at by any standard and tossing a few gold coins in the authors direction will help in encouraging future submissions appearing within the guild.
Well Done.
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Not a bad effort. Layout and spacing is a little off and may require a 2nd set of eyes to fix this. The material appears consistent with any DM being able to make use of the material in one form or another.
Love the fact the author attempted his own maps and their look didn't detract from my rating at all. Practical and usable is all they need to be. My only suggestion next time would be to place them on a page of their own so that they are bigger and can be exported into a VTT should the DM desire.
From a personal POV, there is a lack of referencing within the text and something that should be looked at for future submissions (look at what other more known writers do and mirror them). Personal style is appreciated but practicality can sometime trump perssonal style.
The recommended price, I belive, is slightly high for what this is and the length presented, in comparison to other product on the guild; something to look at and adjust accordingly.
Overall ... nice little submission and worth a few gold coins in the authors direction to encourage future submissions within the guild.
Well done.
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Caveat to start with ... the 5 star rating is for the HUGE amount of work that has gone into the material presented. A note has been posted within the discussion re the cover violation which I believe may be an oversight by a new author to the guild. This violation hasn't been taken into account when applying the rating.
Ok ... as I stated above, there is a HUGE amount of work put into this product ... way more than the PWYW deserves.
Every item within here is chock full or lore that the DM and players can leach upon to help enhance and flesh out their games. Though the layout of the items is not quite to WotC standard, this has been overlooked purely due to the time and effort the author placed into putting this thing together. Nice overall layout (love the indents on the pages so that if you decided to book form this, the pages wouldn't lose written material into the margins). Stock art appears to be used throughout which is not a negative in my book. The author has made creative use of tables and has added several new creatures and variants for the DM to use.
Overall ... way more in here than PWYW deserves so swinging the author a few gold coins would go along way to seeing another such gem make an appearance with the guild.
Well done (2 thumbs up)
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Another nice little adventure where the Backstory alone is worth the money paid.
No spoilers but the villisn of the adventure was the highlight here, as it should be. The motive behind his actions fit the adventure well, allowing for a slightly difference little menace to evolve.
Again, and there seems to be a familiar pattern here, not much prep is required to run this. I''d even go as far to say that an ingenious DM, as backed up within the adventure, could expand on what's here quite easily to allow the adventure to continue after its conclusion.
With a new creature and magic item, along with a stat'd out boss mob, you can't go wrong with this little gem.
Well done fella's ... on to the next one (2 thumbs up).
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I love adventures that are short to read, would be easy to run but still leave enough leaway to add my own spin ... this is one of those adventures.
For the price you pay, you wont be didappointed. This linear adventure comes with 3 new creatures and a major boss mob, stat'd and ready to go. The adventure plot could fit into any homebrew game with little to no changing.
Although it could do with a 2nd set of eyes to check gor minor errors, these dont deter from the overall rinning of the game, and definitely didn't deter from the 5 star rating.
Well done gentlemen ... on to the next in the series (2 thumbs up)
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For the price, you wont complain. The adventure is well constructed, even to the point of allowing creative DMs the ability of spinning their own side quests from this, allowing the adventure extra weight.
Great avenues for extended roleplay, combat, with a side line of Sherlock Holmes mixed in.
Enjoyed so much that I went and download the 2nd adventure by the authors.
EDIT: I was quite impressed that I download their entire back catalogue of addon adventures! Looking forward to seeing what comes next (2 thumbs up)
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Thanks for the review, we're glad you enjoyed it! |
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Seriously Thank you for the purchases. Please feel free to give us feed back on some of those other products. (Not quite our entire catalogue, but still can't thank you enough) |
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A great little adventure that should be quite easy to run without a map. The path is linear in nature which would lend well for those wanting a non-complicated one shot whilst moving from one adventure to another.
BEWARE the final boss mob ... that 'sucker' is vicious!
Good layout and easy to read ... well worth the extremely low investment!
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First and foremost, stop complaining as the product is free!
I won't elaborate much more on what a great piece this is. The rarities are a little off but for what it is, this contains some of the best magic items I've seen on the guild as a FREE product.
You have me in your sights for seeing what other works of delight you release in the future.
Well done
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4 pages???
Try under a 1/2 page of content ... for the same recommended $$$ as an adventure that would give you 30+ pages!!!
Not good at all!
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A great alternative to the mundane magic items already in use ... see addition comments in tge discussion area.
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For those doing ToA or running anything within Chult ... this is a MUST have! There is a ton bucket load of work within this that any DM will get a benefit from. Well Done!
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I have to agree ... AWESOME COVER ART!!! Great adventure with equally great layout. Heaven help the players as they go through this one!
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Will do exactly what it is designed to do. Mind you, I could also see these being used by younger players yet to develop the finer art of writing small. Well Done!
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A bucket load more magic items for your ever growing collection. Well written with great layout. The fact that it includes if attunement is required and rarity is a bonus from others I've read. Well Done!
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