The players LOVED this session. Thanks for the great content.

I ran this as a oneshot. I pulled no punches and my team survived. well one of them did. Individually told them they could have the big prize at the end and ran it as a murder house. The winner just became a future big bad.

This is a fun idea that needs some work.

Like the other reviewers say, needs some proofreading, and a run through Grammerly.

I did a quick math check, and for a party of 5 fifth level characters most of the encounters are easy, with one medium and one Deadly. The magic tiems in here are more standard items for 15th-20th level characters.

I like the custom weapon, the book maybe needs more drawbacks, like in the artifact tables of the DMG? (Just riffing here).

The best part of this library adventure was the books. I reall liked that there were actual descriptions of the books in the library.

I'd like to see more of your stuff! Keep at it.

You should definitely have someone proofread your stuff before you release it. I'm not trying to bash you, it's just some of the sections are hard to read with the typos. Other than grammar problems, I had some questions about some of the books they find. Does the fitness book heal them 1 hp or they gain +1 max hp? If they find the Volo's guide, does that mean the characters have access to the same book we have in the real world?