The story isn't bad, but it's very poorly written. I'd be embarrassed to charge people for it when there are so many mistakes. The discussion is literally full of lists of mistakes and they haven't bothered to go back and fix any of it. Oh and the map is soooo bad. It's not labeled and doesn't match up with descriptions in the text. Passages turn in different directions than described. Rooms are different sizes than described. I literally had to sit down and make 4 pages of notes with everything corrected before running it today. I was looking forward to running AL, so it would cut down on my usual prep time. I guess that won't be the case with the current material though.
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