Just finished running as DM. Excellent work. Hilariously fun and creepy. My players said it was some of the most entertaining adventures and encounters they have played in a long time. Player base is 4 players with 30 years each of RPing and 3 newbies with less than 2 years. I as DM have 35 yrs of exp. in RP. A few notes however. First: a clearer path for the players. While the open sandbox did lead to some great times, there was at times a sense of confusion amongst the PCs as to what/where/why they were doing next. I think just a tad bit more structure would smooth that out. Second: The ending. TBH it needs an out for the PCs. Simply killing them or having them wink out of existence is a clean way it is not a good way to end such an otherwise superb adventure. Please correct that one flaw. Thank you for your wonderful work and keep the stories coming.
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