Not bad.
Over all not too bad. For the price, you get about what you paid for. A nice story hook that's beyond a simple paragraph. It's actually about 2 pages of material.
Nice hook. The 'why's are not explained too much, but are more or less left up to the Storyteller. This isn't a horrible thing. It lets you have some options but leaves it a little open ended for some people's tastes.
The concept was a decent one.
Thing is the 'title' doesn't really fit the product. There's a mention of O'Tolley's but it's not the actual thrust of the story, and is only tagently connected to the story. I may have gone with something like "The Organic Plague" or something. I'm a big fan of O'Tolley's so I'd hoped for... well More O'Tolley's I suppose. Not quite a bait and switch, but I feel that the title is a touch misleading.
Again this isn't horrible. It's not a bad product. I'd have given about 2.5 if that was an option. The writing could be polished a bit, but there's nothing too glaring. For a buck, it's decent. I've gotten some stuff from the Storyteller's vault that is far below this in quality. And.. some a bit above. Nice middle ground here. Worth the .74 or 99 cent to buy.
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