Flavor wise this subclass is very nice, it does have a lot of overlap with the oath of the ancients paladin. The author does a good job of describing what this subclass feels like, the paladin tenants provided seem to fit nicely. Furthermore the spell-list makes sense and seems balanced. However during the channel divinity part some things can be improved:
-There are some weird sentences and formatting mistakes, making the first channel divinity way more difficult to read and understand than necessary . Take a good look at how other paladin oaths are formatted and just copy that format!
-The second channel divinity (changeling) seems really OP to me, unless I’m mistaken it seems like a more easily available and improved banishment spell.
-Some of the other abilities either are difficult to understand what they actually do (the sight for example) or are to strong forcing an foe to dance without any save (Court Dance).
Summarizing: Flavor wise this product does a good job! I totally get the idea of a flamboyant distracting fey paladin and the abilities supplement this. However at its current state the subclass is not playable, balance issues and vague or complicated abilities make it difficult to use. However! Should these issues be fixed this subclass could become a nice and flavorful addition!
EDIT:
The author has updated the product, using some of my feedback. I see a lot of improvements, so good job! I think it warrants a 4 star rating now.
PS: I know how difficult it is to get revieuws, I'am a starting contentcreator myself and getting people to rate your products is difficult.
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