If the questions editing issues were taken care of (see discussion section) and some good maps and handouts added to this adventure, it could be 5 stars. Here's hoping it gets an update.

This adventure is an example of excellence that I hope that other writers take note. It has 4 things that I'd like to call out as key components of a great adventure module:

1. Wonderment - There's exotic locations and magic of the sort that players always dream about when they imagine playing D&D.
2. Balance - There is a nice mix of interesting role playing, creative puzzles, and challenging combat in this adventure so that players of every sort will have a good time.
3. Story - The story is not only interesting and fun, it also ties into the larger world and potentially other adventures in the area. That's always ideal for capturing imaginations and getting players excited.
4. Excellence - The editing and game balance is top tier, something that not all adventures can claim. From the box text to the combat options to the beautiful maps and handouts, a great deal of love and attention has been given to this product and it shows.

An interesting dungeon crawl, but the story is a complete side trek from the season's narrative. "Ohmagerd our town's just been invaded and taken over by evil cultists! Quick, let's go explore this random ancient pyramid and take all the stuff!"

Great flavor, interesting story, and a cool villain. Slightly unpolished, but all the pieces work just fine.

This is an adventure with a great concept and a very flawed execution. It is rife with errors (including experience minimum and maximum), it has continuity errors with the previous adventure, and the basic concept of the adventure is not support by the components within it. If this adventure received an extensive rewrite, it could be quite good. As is, even with excessive guideance and preparation, it is not a lot of fun.