First I want to start off with saying that I LOVE heavy roleplay games and this adventure is right up our ally! The cover art is absolutely beautiful! I absolutely love the concept of the adventure and especially love the fact that (even in its newest version) has alot of room to play with as a Dungeon Master. Overall it's a very intriguing adventure!

There are a great deal of options at ones disposal and the fact that it is not as detailed as some adventure modules I have read over my...looks over shoulder...26 years of playing and DM'ing for Dungeons & Dragons, it can be customized to fit any DM's style and can be adapted for play in pretty much ANY D&D fantasy setting. Setting Neutral modules are always a plus!

I can think of only a couple of things to add to this adventure that would make it easier to run (Mainly for New DM's or DM's who want to try their hand at a more Roleplay-centric style).

1) Maybe a prewritten text box (just a sentence or two) to each of the NPC's to describe their words and reactions upon first meeting the player characters.

2) A quirk or mannerism for each NPC.

3) A mini-stat block for the NPCS (just the basics like Stats, HP, AC, Saves, Skills, Passive Checks for DM use)

I applaud your work and can't wait to run this, which is saying something bc I generally do not like or care for "one-shots"! I also look forward to seeing what other wonderful works you release in the future!

Great job!