This module provides a small, fun adventure that can serve as a starting adventure. There is not a realy precedent for combat so RP takes the spotlight. The adventures arrive in a small town were a festival is beign prepared. However the festival and the villagers have som ulterior motives. I shall phrase my review in a few bullet points. Good parts: -At the start a small explanation/backstory is given, it provides enough information. -The different segments of the module are color coded. -Some NPC's are provided, including quotes, flaws, ideals etc. -The festival provides several different activities such as wrestling or dancing. DC's are provided were neccerary. -The writing is good and functional but not outstanding. -The writer provides several options, depending on the choices the players make.

Parts that can be improved: -Personaly (others might disagree) I think the color scheme and formatting used is very ugly. -It misses some form of summary or mindmap that a DM can use to make more sense of the progression and possibilities. -Some more/other activities or mysterious NPC's would be nice. -There is no map or overview of the town.

Other note: -This type of adventure might not be for everyone, it is lighthearted almost childish with no real possibilty for combat. This is neither a negative or good part but it is worth mentioning.

This class is flavorful but also specific, the author advises that this class be used in a setting were undead roam the lands. It feels a bit like a undead hunting Witcher or perhaps an undead hating Aragorn from the LOTRs. The document looks nice enough and it follows the normal format. The abilities of the class resemble those found in the ranger, fighter and even paladin, combining them in a sensible way. THe abilities are a bit straightforward and some of them could do with a bit more flavoring or imagination. Two subclasses are provided, one specializes in fighting hordes and the other provides spellcasting abilities. Summarising: if you are looking for an undead hunter class that fits a specific setting this product will suit your needs perfectly. It is well-written and it seems balanced. The drawback is that the class has only a single niche preventing it from being balanced or even fun in a different setting.

First off this document looks absolutely gorgeous, so that is a nice plus! Flavor wise the hospitaler seems to resemble a paladin subclass fitted into the fighter format. The hospitaler, like a paladin takes an oath giving this subclass a lot of flavor to work with. Now lets take a look at the abilities:

-Healing hands: the abilities given do not really resemble the title of this ability, you gain a lot of proficiencies that I do not really associate with the class but you do not get any healing hands like ability. Why the investigation proficiency? Also would expertise with the healers kit fit this class a lot better than the herbalist kit? I would rewrite this into allowing the hospitaler to use the healers kit as a bonus action perhaps.

-Merciful relief seems nice! Perhaps let it scale more, perhaps copy the sneak attack scaling.

-Combat medic: It is a very flavorful ability though and I can see it work very nice. The temporary hit points given are not really that high but you can use this ability an unlimited number of times, this ability seems balanced.

-Hospitalers reprieve: one thing I would change is this sentence. they can immediately make a saving throw to attempt to end one effect of their choice. (also what saving throw? Different effects require different saves. It would make more sense to choose the effect before rolling)

-Comforting respite: Spells? this class does not get spells, you sure it is not a paladin subclass?

Greetings R. Wellink

Flavor wise this subclass is very nice, it does have a lot of overlap with the oath of the ancients paladin. The author does a good job of describing what this subclass feels like, the paladin tenants provided seem to fit nicely. Furthermore the spell-list makes sense and seems balanced. However during the channel divinity part some things can be improved:

-There are some weird sentences and formatting mistakes, making the first channel divinity way more difficult to read and understand than necessary . Take a good look at how other paladin oaths are formatted and just copy that format!

-The second channel divinity (changeling) seems really OP to me, unless I’m mistaken it seems like a more easily available and improved banishment spell.

-Some of the other abilities either are difficult to understand what they actually do (the sight for example) or are to strong forcing an foe to dance without any save (Court Dance).

Summarizing: Flavor wise this product does a good job! I totally get the idea of a flamboyant distracting fey paladin and the abilities supplement this. However at its current state the subclass is not playable, balance issues and vague or complicated abilities make it difficult to use. However! Should these issues be fixed this subclass could become a nice and flavorful addition!

EDIT: The author has updated the product, using some of my feedback. I see a lot of improvements, so good job! I think it warrants a 4 star rating now. PS: I know how difficult it is to get revieuws, I'am a starting contentcreator myself and getting people to rate your products is difficult.

Like it says this is a simple cavemap, it is supplied in different ways (grid, furnished, not furnished etc.). As a amateur mapmaker myself I quite like the style, it looks quite different than the usual maps I see (in a good way). Especialy the furnishing is very well made (did you make those assets yourself?). The textures do look a bit "watery" but maybe that is the style you where going for. All said and done if you are a DM and need a cave map have a look, you might like what you see!

This product has a lot of work and thought put into it. The main flavor of this class are the different stances you can adopt, giving you different benefits. Later on special attacks become aviable supplementing the different stances. However some things are keeping it back: -Flavor wise I do not really understand what is going on yet. Why do they have to return and how does this fit the class’s abilities? I find it difficult to see how the class abilities relate to the flavor of this subclass, maybe I’m missing something. -The stances give you proficiency in different weapons, whilst the idea itself is unique and interesting it also seems clumsy. Whenever you switch stance you lose lore profligacy and gain a new one. Maybe a more elegant solution can be found. -Balance wise the abilities are all over the place. Some are obviously way more useful and powerful than others (ex: storm herald stance, seeking weakness). -All class abilities are combat focused. Most subclasses also gain a lot of different flavorful or out of combat abilities, they are lacking in this subclass. All said and done there are some interesting ideas presented that are worth salvaging as a DM or players. I like how the creator is toying with new ideas and concepts but I do not think they are game-ready as of yet.

A nicely written concise guide on skill challenges. Very useful if you as a DM are unfamiliar or inexperience with skill challenges!

It is quite a shame no one reviewed this product yet. First off it looks very good, the formatting, the use of art and the general layout are all very clean, you can see that a lot of work has been put in the presentation. Using this product you can reward your players with something different and new. There are plenty of options presented so you will not often run into the same one twice. The things presented here do not really fit my style as a DM but if you are looking for something to help improve inspiration this product is perfect! One thing I would like to see added is a note about the impact these inspirations can have on balance, as a DM it is obviously up to you when to use it but some of the inspirations are quite powerfull.

Greetings

R. Wellink

A simple product that delivers precisely what you need. Several lesser elementals are presented to use, they fill a much needed gap! They are simpel to use and seem balanced.

This adventure is pretty straighforward and it is written well enough to make it easy to follow. Any Matt Colville fans will enjoy this module, it takes Colvilles Delian Tomb idea and adds more substance to it. Some nice maps have been provided to help with the adventure. Some things that would improve the adventure: Add creature statblocks either in the appendix or inline. Make the DCs and skillchecks stand out more by using italics or bold. Add some more fleshed out NPC motivations. Add the battlemaps and perhaps some player handouts as seperate documents.

All things considered the adventure provides an easy to use adventure but it still needs some work to use as a DM.

Greetings

R. Wellink

Very funny and usefull as a bard. We are not all as great as Scanlan but with this you can get close! It does need some more pun centered mockeries I think.

This adventure is absolutly beautifull. It looks like it has been made by the wizards themselves! It is well writen with some usefull tools for the DM. I have started writing my own adventures and making my own content on the DMs guild and this product definitly inspired me to improve.

It is amazing that this is offered as a free product. It is filled with nicely made and written monsters with artwork to boot. This definitly made me a very happy DM!