I am leaving my comment as part of this review. I do believe once you figure out the flow and confusing reading order these adventures are a bunch of fun and very useful for creating quick dungeons.

These are neat and can be a lot of fun, HOWEVER, the Story Entry parts are very confusing. They come before anything that indicates when they are supposed to be read. For Example, I kept trying to figure out when to read "Entry 2" because the game starts with reading "Entry 1" but guess what? you only read "Entry 2" if you fight a specific monster and in its stat block it then tells you to read "Entry 2". This leads to a lot of confusion the first few times playing if you do not get the specific pieces to fall into place for entries to happen and make sense.

I have been playing through the first quest, and may be doing it wrong. I cannot seem to figure out what parts of the book correlate to certain maps, if any. I am just walking through the place with traps and creatures randomly appearing or not, but there really isn't a narrative to each area.

So this is fun and it made a real fan out of me. It can also work well as introduction to D&D for 2 1st level PCs.

It is really hard for me to get into it. I think the concept is an awesome idea and could be a great format if it gets polished up a little. It is a little confusing, and that one of the things that could be polished up, so that if flows better and does seem like its broken into segments. The dialog is a little weak and could have some improvement. I get that it takes a lot of time and effort to create somehting like this and i feel like you put a lot of effort into this, to come up with tables concepts and charts and variables. It is a lot. lol Another thing to was the trap table i couldnt find the trap stats anywhere, i had to get them out of the book. I feel like your onto something big with this style of game play. The mechanics are there and is a solid product that you have created and put out. Thanks for the content keep doing what your doing. :)

It's great...I like randomness of it and that I can play whenever it is convenient to me!

Excellent work on the adventures and tables. I find it easily adabtable to DM with a party, and the tables are a great resource for custom adventures altogether.

Little confusing atfirst but once I started playing it made a lot more sense, could I recommend seperating the tables into their own pdf seperate from storyline things just so that there's less scrolling through. Absolutely loved the concept of it, and the randomizing factor, found the d12 rolls necessary a little high to hit and ended up having a lot of empty rooms on some of my play throughs. Excellent product can't wait for whatever else you release, definitely going to be a continuous supporter of your work.