The adventure is a thoroughly art-worked or crafted product, and noteworthy already for that alone. The layout is proper enough, interior likewise, text format and font choice just as well. If you have been away from adventure-writing and need a solid example, then this one sure serves well. If you need an adventure 'in between' or to transport your players across the world-map, this may be a good choice just as well!
Structure and roleplaying stats are presented in a minimalism i appreciated. Nothing in the entire work is really lacking, sloppy, or poorly done. Formidable discipline and mindset at work I would call it.
Contextually the story was absolutely not my gusto. Still it was easy to understand, and aiming from a beginning to a middle and a climax. The prose used was not intermixing storytelling with the meta-language (Damage-Dealer, Tank, DPS...) either.
Contrary to my own freestyle writing this adventure is well-structured, with no babbling and no show-off, hence my 'solid' estimation of it.
I give 4 stars due not being fascinated by the story at all, and because I really think one could have made use of more or alternate fantasy species in this adventure.
Goodbye!
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Shameless begging for reviews of my own contributions: http://www.drivethrufiction.com/product/236956/The-simple-twist & https://goo.gl/Cdi2Pc both need good, skilled reviews (even, if the vote makes it 1 star, just be honest, so customers know what they can expect)...
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