You should definitely have someone proofread your stuff before you release it. I'm not trying to bash you, it's just some of the sections are hard to read with the typos. Other than grammar problems, I had some questions about some of the books they find. Does the fitness book heal them 1 hp or they gain +1 max hp? If they find the Volo's guide, does that mean the characters have access to the same book we have in the real world?
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