There's a lot of content here but it could really use some redevelopment in presentation.
The first thing is I don't see the need to separate statblocks by racial/culture concepts. This could be a much better product sorting statblocks by profession/category and then providing non-race-based statblocks with offering an earlier note of racial bonuses to add IF we're factoring for NPC race AND have a list at the beginning of suggested NPC types per town.
The other thing I really don't like about this product is the terrible formatting. Statblocks are constantly cutting off one page or coloum and spilling onto the next. This is a digital book, what harm is there in taking a few more pages up? The fact I have to copy the statblocks onto Microsoft word so I can properly format them is a problem.
I needed these statblocks for a project I've been working on for a long time. But I would have really appreciated a little more thought process had gone into the formatting and presentation. Please release an update version with these things considered.
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