Possibly the best First adventure that a new player can play,

Honestly the module seems to barely forfill AL module guidelines and is nothing but a cash grab. It's doubltful that anyone actually glanced at the module other then the author and even then that was once if a stupor.

Combat is poorly directed and is pretty much over within three turns if you have four players, I am obviously not counting the possible pointless combat which only come about if your party brutally murder a baby animal, Seriously killing baby animals or children is morally frowned upon,

Take five minutes to print the module and ask a friend to read the module and get them use a pen to fix it. Personally I'd change the ForkedArea3 to a 1) Mama Bear is under attack by Five Starving Wolves 2) Mama Wolf is under attack by Two Starving Brown Bears the party obivously charge in, eitherway Mama falls to previous wounds leaving Lily to take up the cub. OR the party pass on by and miss out like heartless adventurers.

The final scene is very very very weak, I'd suggest adding that in round two three goblins(scarecrow if strong party) reskinned as straw dolls appear from behind so that your ranged/mage PCs have to adjust. Have Lily begin glowing turn one with the inner light becoming stronger as the Dolls gain visible strength, it's all thematic drama so that theres a pressure.

eitherway scene/encounter ends and Lily decides to let go and move on to visit family in Hulburg (somewhere else). There's no reward/promise of repayment for the favor so maybe Lily should leave a cub in the care of the PCs? Grant a Story Award to one Single player character, Wild Wolf cub OR Wild Bear cub tie in loss of a mother and a cute trait like a being woken at sunrise to a nuzzle or nose lick.

As a Player, this was awesome, xanathar's guide to everything was on the table in front of the DM and none of use twigged and realised the fish bowl. The module took a little of an hour and I'm not sure my character will ever be ready to face Xanathar the beholder.

As a DM I'd like to say that this was enjoyable to run, its four combat encounters and I realise that the DM who ran it for me added a split in the tunnel so that the eye told us to go one way but, which led to a deadend and the snail fight, which caused us to "trust" to beacon alittle more then a suspected traitorous NPC. either way DMs need to add their own spin if your running this for AL. yes its short and sweet but, really borrow a copy and then see if you want access to certs.