A decent introduction adventure. A few spelling and grammar errors throughout, and awkward wordings. Not very imaginative with the names ("Joe" doesn't fit in with what I think of as 'D&D names.')
This may be because I'm a new DM and if I was more experienced I wouldn't think twice about it, but I found the lack of explanation as to why the guards in town hadn't already dealt with the issue odd.
Overall, it took some tweaking, but it was a solid first outing. And the price was right.
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