I picked it up thinking it was an encounter, turns out it is some new enemy npcs to use in your campaign.

credits

• 6 new npcs from cr 1/2 to 3

issues

• Their saves, skills, and abilities feel strong for their CR, compared to creatures from the monster manual

possible improvements

• Power balancing or adjustment of CR
• Descriptions of each npc

A short dungeon crawl focusing more on problem solving than combat.

Credits

• Well organized and easily readable content
• Novel traps and secrets to be found
• Includes problem solving as well as some fighting

Issues

• No art besides a very small map
• Descriptions don't seem to match up with the map (ex. description of room 7 mentions a door from room 2 into room 9, map does not show them connecting)
• While it could basically be dropped in any campaign world, most of the background references a custom world

Possible improvements

• Bigger and more detailed map
• Add some art, even basic sketches of some of the traps or rooms might help a lot to visualize
• Proof content vs map to confirm accuracy