Positive: Good to see some sorcerer love, and fey is a great origin to explore. The features are flavorful and useful. I also love that you supplied your own art!
Negative: I think the visual presentation could improve; I understand what my friend was saying to me now about my own work that parchment background is distracting. I like the ideas here, but I think the help of a trusted editor may be able to make the language in your article pop. A nit-picky concern, I'm left wondering why the Sylvan sorcerer is "Sylvan Born." Is there something about the circumstances of a Sylvan sorcerer's birth that helps them manifest their powers? In the description, it seems as though the Sylvan blessing can appear later in life.
Overall: 3 out of 5 stars! The more sorcerous origins the better, and this option is very flavorful. I think its presentation could improve, and though this article is short a player could get a lot out of this article at the table. Cheers!
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