Positive: Yay undead player options! Like other products by this author, the race is well thought-out, well formatted, basically balanced, and useful. I once agian have to compliment the author on his ability to put together an enjoyable and effective collection of art!

Negative: As I have stated before, a trustworthy editor would help make the language in this article more effective and distinctive. I wonder why the author did not publish this article under the OGL instead of limiting it to the DMs Guild; even though that does not make this work any less valuable, it does sour my taste toward it a little.

Overall: This is a fun and effective character concept--one I would be glad to see at the table. With a little editing, I would rate this a 4-star product.

I like the idea behinf this race alot. THough the sunlight senativity kinda hurts. It would be nice to see a feat or a class option in the future to offset this a little.

Very interesting, especially with Curse of Strahd coming out. It seems balanced with the Player's Handbook races, although the sunlight sensitivity is going to make them a lot less useful in many campaigns, kinda like the drow.

i did enjoy this very close, the changes i would make changes Size there a spelling error. first word Size. HDhampirs. Vamp bite id change the dice to d6 or d8 due to race mimmic 4th ed race... your on track.