At 26 pages, 25 are the content. 2 pages are maps (24 & 25), and page 26 are 2 pictures.

The adventure/scenario appears quite good for starting adventurers.

I have noticed some 'typos' throughout (also some monster stats).

As stated by others, the maps could have been improved by being 'reworked/rescanned at a higher resolution'. I was surprised there were no page numbers.

Also, what if one the players drank the water?

Altogether quite good.

Good little starting adventure for my sons new party. Human ranger, wild elf F/T and human magic user along with npc drow C/F. Some injuries but no one fully died. Looking forward to running F2 and F3.

A nicely done opening adventure for a new party, with useful possibilities for continuation into a small campaign - or indeed further still. The maps would benefit from being reworked/rescanned at a higher resolution (parts of the two area maps aren't very clear presently, especially around the castle remains on the Mont du Plat map, with many of the vegetation and building shapes heavily pixellated). Printing the map page at half size helps somewhat with this, if you find it a particular problem. Oh, and page numbers would be nice to prevent the classic sheaf of unidentifiable pages when you accidentally drop your printout on the floor!

Great little adventure with a decent hook and some wrinkles for the players to navigate. I would have liked to see a little bit more on consequences if the players happen to drink the water, but I'm sure a slightly experienced DM could figure out a work around.