I have to agree with the last reviewer here. Calling the art 'rough' is the most apt description I can think of, but I believe some further elaboration is owed-- The art is drawn entirely in pencils ( I think ) with colour slapped over the top in photoshop or something. The colours are especially garish and overall, it needs a lot of work.

More time taken to ink and colour this properly may help it's presentation, but nothing can salvage the paneling. I couldn't tell which order to read in half the time, and by the 10th page or so I was completely lost.

It's a good concept for a story, just very poorly rendered. It's free though, of course, so I can't complain about the price.

The art is very rough, but the worst part was the proofreading. Spelling, grammar, typos, all threw me completely out of the story. I couldn't get past the first eight pages.