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Overall, this is a great product that I definitely recommend picking up. The subclasses and new races seem like a lot of fun and would be a welcome addition to any game. There are a handful of typos or verbiage inconsistencies compared to a WotC product, but aside from the few exceptions I mention below, that doesn't hinder my comprehension or enjoyment of the products.
Ranger Bladedancer: 4/5
A nicely rounded subclass. It doesn't seem too powerful and adds some nice options to a class that so many people think is lacking. A couple small critiques: the bladedancer doesn't have any non-combat features, which is different from most subclasses. The formatting is also a little confusing, because half of the Dances are listed before the main subclass, and half after. I'd prefer seeing the dances all together in a single list instead of splitting them into two groups.
Druid Circle of the River: 5/5
A really clever subclass with a great blend of combat and utility features, and a creative new way to enhance your wild shapes. This gives a druid a lot of fine control over their wild shape abilities, and although your wild shape CR isn't as potent as a Moon Druid's, this subclass feels just as good at tanking and perhaps even better at savaging your enemies!
Wizard School of Binding: 4/5
This is a very cool concept, borrowing from some of the Ranger Beastmaster mechanics but taking on a more wizard-y flavor. There is one significant mechanical snag, however. The 6th- and 10th-level abilities allow you to “learn” new spells, but they don’t count against the number of spells you know. Wizards “know” spells in a different way than most spellcasting classes: “Your spellbook is the repository of the wizard spells you know” (PH 114). However, you prepare only a certain number of spells each day, dependent upon your Wizard level + your INT mod. Do these spells count as always prepared without counting against the number of spells you can prepare? Or do you still have to prepare them? Are they physically in your spellbook when you learn these spells, or do you innately learn them without having to write them down?
My best guess is that the school of binding wizard would intuitively know these spells without having to scribe them, and they are always prepared/don’t count against the number of prepared spells. Authorial intent as to whether this is the case should be specified within the text of these abilities, though.
Fighter Skybreaker Archetype: 4/5
The flavoring is extremely strong and well-thought-out in this subclass. As a regular listener to the Crit Academy podcast, I know that this subclass is based on the Stormlight Archive, and in the flavor, heraldic signs, and instructors, I see many of Sanderson's fingerprints in the backstroy of the class. Very nicely done!
The subclass's mechanics are also really solid and look like a ton of fun to play.
I do think you should absolutely cite Brandon Sanderson as inspiration, though, because his name and mention of the Stormlight Archive did not appear anywhere in the supplement (not even in the credits) which could be construed as derivative plagairism.
Cleric Warmind Domain: 4/5
Thematically, this is a fun idea, and mechanically this subclass offers some really interesting options for the cleric. The channel divinity that allows you to turn living humanoids as you would undead is pretty powerful, but likely not game-breaking.
Aside from a few typos, the only real problem with the subclass is the 6th-level ability. Its wording is very ambiguous. First, it says "when you cast an abjuration spell of 1st level or higher, you can simultaneously redirect some of the psionic energy used to create a psionic barrier on yourself that lasts until you finish a long rest. The barrier has hit points equal to twice your cleric level + your Wisdom modifier." Later in the same ability, however, it says "Whenever you cast an abjuration spell of 1st level or higher, the barrier regains a number of hit points equal to twice the level of the spell." Basically, as it's written, the ability has a really fun and useful premise but the wording is a bit amgibuous.
Werecat Race: 5/5
This is a fantastic race! It's fun, flavorful, and can easily be tweaked and adapted to a number of different races for homebrew worlds. I would very highly recommend buying it and reading over it. I'm all but certain you'll get good use out of it in your games in one form or another.
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