Ugh, just what we need clogging up a GAME site - socially correct bad, preachy fiction. The publisher's blurb - putatively there to convince you to download - says all you need to know about this short story: 1) it was written in a single afternoon and hasn't ever been edited; 2) it was rejected by the anthology for which it was written; but 3) the author felt it still needed to be set free upon the world. I agree with the first two points.
It occurs to me there are any number of internet locations that cater to exactly this type of thing. This isn't one of them.
[1 of 5 Stars!]