2-4 Cavalry Book 1: A New Hope

I suspect that this work is self-edited, which is not necessarily a bad thing. But in this case, running this by someone who wasn't a hard-core Slammers fan might have been useful. The free sample provided reads like a mediocre blog post, written for subscribers who already know what the blogger is talking about. For example, before the info dump on the vehicle, unit and planet, there should be with something like: "This introduction will detail development of the unique vehicle which equips the player character's mercenary unit, then offer an overview of the unusual inception of said unit and end with a brief history of the current situation on the planet of initial deployment." The info dump should then be divided into those three sections, so that GMs who skim the section can later come back and find what they prove to need a bit easier.

Epub Metadata are bad
I use Calibre and for book name i have temp0, Author is EricJ, no editor, no publication date, no tags